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Poem

Tue Nov 27, 2007, 5:13 AM
This is my first ever poem dont know how it came to me i just heard the words in my head and decided to write em down, home u like it and do feel free to leave a comments saying wat u thought



Bullies by Chris Baker

(A story of Adolescence)



Backed up against the wall with your arms covering your head

With every hit that penetrates you wish you were dead,

Pushed there a second ago your eyes shut tight

Huddled on the floor they have the advantage in height.



All you can do is tense

And wait for the next hit

You cant take any more and you start to shake.

Its pumping through your body, this is something your mind cant take

They’ve pushed you too far this time

You have to rise to the bait.



As you rise you can see the shock in their eyes

All those rumours they spread all those dirty lies.



The rage boils up inside you,

Your eyes fall on the closest

You curl your fists and hit him your hardest.

He falls to the floor in shrieks of pain

You can feel the hot blood pumping through your veins.



As the blood pours from his nose

You turn to his friend and get into an attack pose,

As you strike him the others start to close in

You feel a sharp pain in your chest and find it hard to breathe in.

This pain is intense, it’s the worst you’ve ever felt

It is a lot more than the bullies have ever dealt.

As you double over your vision starts to blur

This is it, you cant feel anything.



Silence draws in

  • Mood: Seasonal
  • Listening to: Nightwish
  • Reading: Nothing
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Nothing

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:omg: Sweet Child O'Mine! I wish I could fave Journals!

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:iconthecrossisonlyiron:
You rly like it that much

Thanx 4 the compliment
:iconmorologus-es:
Are you religious? :paranoid:

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:iconthecrossisonlyiron:
Not in the slightest

why do you ask
:iconmorologus-es:
"The Cross Is Only Iron"...:paranoid:...

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:iconthecrossisonlyiron:
Its a line from a Nightwish song called Bless The Child

Plus it works with what i personally think about religion but i shall not go into here seen as i may insult someone lol
:iconthecrossisonlyiron:
I was gonna have G'mork who is the bear/wolf creature in the neverending story but someone has already sloten it GRRR :@ lol
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There, there. :petting:

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:iconmorologus-es:
Insult away! I won't be insulted! You won't be insulted! So...

... MY CHATROOM! GO TO IT NOW, WHEREUPON WE SHALT DISCUSS, SAID RELIGIOUS VIEWS!:D

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